Wow Erin that was spicy! I loved how you incorporated the parts of words or letters that matched the next phrase to create transitions especially on "signifying nothing". I think this looks really good so far and I like the dark background to match the tone of the piece.
I love your structure on this overall! It really works a lot with your dialogue and reinforces its message. I also like the creativity of combining multiple phrases together to add your own flair to the transition techniques. "signifying nothing" especially worked really well with this.
Only nitpick I have is that "a walking shadow" holding the a all the way through I find a litttle distracting but that might be just me on that one.
i love "signifying --- nothing" ing signifying whats ccoming next and its nothing. the fade to black is so well done i think your tone and color marry the audio really well. i think theres room for more literal transaltions of the audio within your text
Wow Erin that was spicy! I loved how you incorporated the parts of words or letters that matched the next phrase to create transitions especially on "signifying nothing". I think this looks really good so far and I like the dark background to match the tone of the piece.
ReplyDeleteI love your structure on this overall! It really works a lot with your dialogue and reinforces its message. I also like the creativity of combining multiple phrases together to add your own flair to the transition techniques. "signifying nothing" especially worked really well with this.
ReplyDeleteOnly nitpick I have is that "a walking shadow" holding the a all the way through I find a litttle distracting but that might be just me on that one.
i love "signifying --- nothing"
ReplyDeleteing signifying whats ccoming next and its nothing. the fade to black is so well done i think your tone and color marry the audio really well.
i think theres room for more literal transaltions of the audio within your text